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Old 02-19-2014, 10:52 AM   #20
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Very much enjoyed this read.
Pros: the multi kept throughout reeks of lyrical sickness
the story was great. The opener was pretty sweet scheme.
Only Con: I didn't get that she preggers until close to the end,
coulda pointed it out a bit earlier, unless I missed it
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Nice read Frank, Im glad I read it and enjoyed it.
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