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Brenn · 02-17-2014, 04:54 AM

the flow was off a bit here and you didn't have any depth either.... i would work on wordplay and structure.. look into syllable structuring when forming your bars and you'll be fine.

02-17-2014, 04:54 AM	#2
Brenn Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 7 Rep Power: 0	the flow was off a bit here and you didn't have any depth either.... i would work on wordplay and structure.. look into syllable structuring when forming your bars and you'll be fine.