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Old 02-15-2014, 12:29 PM   #5
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for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake

Eh, pretty cool.

what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery

This was dope. All though I think the final executing punch could have been executed differently, but still nice, IMO.

ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant

Personal, I assume. But wording isn't sitting well with me. Infertile concept there, think could have went in a different direction. Plus Stagnant/Pregnant don't rhyme well.

& u know ur not pleasing that young slut, she’s down for bangin fellas
des doesn’t have the drive, so I’ll drive one into her that’d make miss daisy jealous

Lol, cool wording's weird tho. Felt like I read "Drive" way to many times.

ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career

Personal, I take it.

i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill

I think this was a dope concept but a bit of a reach. What does a test dummy have to do with the grill of an audi? See what I'm saying. I think you could have executed that concept differently for more of a smoother transition.

vs

i make mad loot. the kind that allows me to bang porn stars fool
meanwhile, the only gravy u make is the kind that u can add corn starch to

NO real harshness/diss here. Lacks sting.

u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one

Not sure what this means, tbh. Most likely a personal?

u stepped into the ring with a killer, & now ur dead dude
i'll pull out ur i's & toss em in a bowl... that's alphabet soup

Played concept that I've seen flipped on him many times. Also predictable considering his name is Alphabet, it's almost guaranteed some ones going to flip an Alphabet soup punch.

think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story

What do you mean by a pipe dream? Not sure what you were trying to deliver here but I've read about 5 Flappy Bird concepts this week alone, played, I'd say.

how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet

This was dope, but the execution or transition of the concept could have been worded differently. Like the closing punch but the set up to get there is what through me off. I think you could have said something like "And if anyone's ever seen him spread" or something to that effect. IDK, just my opinion.

des stays blazed, with concentrates of strains u can't handle
only time this kid ever sees wax is on q-tips & scented candles

Nah, played.

Overall, pretty close battle, IMO. I think it was struggled execution of concepts vs basic concepts that lacked proper execution. I think ABC's helping hand concept was straight fire vs D's spread/straight bet concept. I'd say I'd have to vote for Alpha for the simple fact, he had less played material that I feel out weighs some of the concepts D dropped. So punch for punch, jab for jab, I got Alpha edging this one. Good battle fellas.

v/ABC-XYZ