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[QUOTE=Hush;275482]Alph



for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake

Boring

what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery store

Anything bags/grocery store is played into oblivion.....this was worded clean tho

ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant

Every punch u thro is infertile? Who wouod ever say that....? This is a reach just to use the personal about his wife. The personal is strong on its own.....but u dont get credit just for mentioning it.

& u know ur not pleasing that young slut, she’s down for bangin fellas
des doesn’t have the drive, so I’ll drive one into her that’d make miss daisy jealous

This is ok

ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career

This is fire.

i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill

Kar/car nameplays are played since 2010. The audi/rings play was fresh....but....it was a text battle....not a fight? I dont like the reaching....




Destro





i make mad loot. the kind that allows me to bang porn stars fool
meanwhile, the only gravy u make is the kind that u can add corn starch to

This is ok

u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one

Its alph a male....not alf the male....veritas is illiterate. Punch is average.

u stepped into the ring with a killer, & now ur dead dude
i'll pull out ur i's & toss em in a bowl... that's alphabet soup

Dope

think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story

Flappy bird punches r played at this point

how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet

Tgis is dope to me

des stays blazed, with concentrates of strains u can't handle
only time this kid ever sees wax is on q-tips & scented candles

Ok



Alroght.....so my issue w alphabets verse is this.......hes creative....and his concepts r dope.....but most of the concepts only work for the punch.....they dont actually make sense both ways.....ur reaching and the actually msg of the diss is lost just so u can execute the punch..... des punches r straigjtforward....concepts rnt spectacular....but they landed .....wording was succinct per usual....wouodnt kill des to go outside rhe box a bit in the future......but id say he did enuff here i just wasnt feelin alphabets verse as much with the reaching.


V destroyer