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Old 02-14-2014, 05:27 PM   #14
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not a fan of this particular style verse, but this section was dope af...

the bees keep stinging, cleaving their own stun
vehemently shogun; him being the lone gun
his speech. uneasy; labored breathing, slow tongued
envy greening; the greed being explosive
the seizure's robust; plague, Egyptian locusts
reachin achievements, needs depleted; hopes bust


flow was on point as usual. though the subject matter didn't tickle my fancy, the actual technical aspect of this verse was solid and with sound imagery. the Egyptian locusts shit was a dope visual.

Nice to see u still rockin my ninja.
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