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Old 02-14-2014, 06:56 AM   #14
Orc
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Join Date: Jan 2013
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Battle Record: 5-1

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- GBL Season 1
- Lyric Olympics
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- Fight Night (3x)
- NBL Picture Roast
- Netcees Battle League (8x)
- NBL Picture League
- Gimmick Battle League
- BA Tag Team
- 1-2 Punch League
- NBL Cypher (3x)
- Battle Arena League
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You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it.
[nothing too witty here. straightforward. somewhat harsh i suppose]
You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap,
But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app.
[nah bad bar. shuda said sumtn like i keep tapping & she hits the pipe. idk. im full of shit]
Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.
[this was a fresh nameplay on someone who's always getting tettris flips. gooood]
I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages,
You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus.
[nah this was very RBish man. too straightforward]
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.
[this was cool. creative]
Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya,
Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta.
[set up killed it. shuda been slicker. concept is cool just fell a tad flat man]

vs

I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim
This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him
[too straightforward. personal wasn't hard enuff for me]
Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share
Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair
[this was slick. slick set up slick punch. slick]
Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin
[nice. personals win battles.]
N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump
[seen too many Hunchback lines on him but the flip was cool]
Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude…
I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon
[noooo. bad]
Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)
[nice wording. didn't like the concept tho]

gooood battle. nice to see ya both back. i felt like Tet went a little more personal and tied in his set ups really well. it could go either way i just felt Tet's angles a little more. well done to both. vote Tet
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