[Seyance]

You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it.
seen it waaay too many times, setup was relevant.
You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap,
But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app.
nice attempt, just mario kinda played it out forever ago
Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.
decent angle on the nameplay.. tett mighta seen it before but i haven't
I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages,
You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus.
while the punch had some potential in it, i'm struggling to get over the rhyme, isn't it pronounced a-soph-o-gus also?
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.
i see what you tried to do, it's a bit obscure to have any sort of big impact.. but not bad
Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya,
Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta.
didn't enjoy the rhyme, setup felt a tad forced. punch was too straight forwards

i liked that you tried to go fresh with the flappy birds it just didn't pull through, a few highlights in your verse, some really creative parts and it was well written for the most part. enjoyed the read but i have seen better from you

vs

Since I’ve been gone…
I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim
This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him
nice try at the personal touch on the flip, it's been done a few times though
Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share
Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair
real relevance in the setup, good personal flip on the concept and well worded
Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin
building up a momentum here, strong personal bar
N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump
haha, i've seen it once or twice but fresh flip worded well
Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude…
I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon
naa, the setup felt forced and the punch was too obvious
Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)
good closer, setup built the flow and gave the punch more impact, nice shit

started slow but had a strong section in the middle and closed it off really well.. kept it personally direct throughout, wording was strong mostly.. still a little rusty on a few lines. but i think it was verse i enjoyed most, more clowning and some real creative angles.

v/tett