Alice - Intro way to long bro I almost left before you started rapping, but then you started rapping. I think its alright, the lyrics are decent but your presence needs some work. The way the words came out it sounded like you were trying to have that style but it was coming out forced.. Just relax, let it flow out dont force it. Sick beat by the way.
Charlie doesn't surf - Alright I'm sure you already know but the mixing was awful in this. I couldn't get through it all, thats how bad the mixing was. Nothing personal against your shit just couldn't get through it. I do appreciate the style you have though. I am a slug, eyedea aesop rock kind of a guy so if you were to clean your shit up and work on your presence/delivery I don't see why I wouldn't pop that shit in my cd player on the wy to work.
Voices - Again, I like the style you're going for but its coming out a little bit forced at times, and at other times it seems more natural. I dunno if you didn't have all the lyrics memorized or if you just don't have the complete confidence, but theres something off in your delivery. Diggin your style though man this shit is right up my alley. Clean up the mixing and all the other shit I mentioned I think you'll be a dope artist dude.
Keep at it.
-fresh
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