How you gonna compare yourself to Orcs when you are hardly a shrew
Those homo infused larping sessions the only time you be bodying dudes
Should have worked with this more. Basic.
The proof is in your check, you posted the actor you fantasize over
I can imagine your room is James Franco themed and its clad with his posters
Concept was cool, think you could have went in a different direction tho to land more effectively as well as added some harshness.
Probably got some unicorn pillows with which you fight @
Diode and @
Bags
But after the slumber party your back on netcee's as the three lonely fags
Nah
You're such a fucking queer that its impossible for you to get your head straight
Cutting off your bug fucking needle dick the only way to get rid of the dead weight
Nah - All thou I think dead weight could have made for a potential dope concept.
If I were to battle you face to face, you'd probably just start kneeling
But the attraction isn't mutual, so you know what I mean when I say no hard feelings
Eh, wording and execution killed here. Could have landed effectively.
vs
son u got bars. u'd beat loadsa nice heads,
Congrats kid ur a Natural... aka a faggot who shudnt post in my threads
No
my worse shit bodies watever ur comin w/ faggot..
if YOU'RE whats considered fresh? i'm a rotting corpse covered in maggots
Lol - Cool.
u never been nice. quit txt & fall away,
if u talking like u got Rust. it's a cutout Matthew McConaughey
No
My Hands got an Over The Top style. Ima vet clown
Yours do too - Girls don't let you touch them from the Neck Down
Haha, this was alright.
i seen u cry and whine already!? like how nerdy is dude,
man the last fresh here was a bitch & didn't come across as girly as u.
Eh - wack.
Overall. I think Orc does take this with minimal effort. I've seen better Bars from you, son. Fresh, work on your concepts and executed them properly dude. Take some time, develop some nice harsh concepts and execute them with the proper precise wording and you'll be straight. NC's is a different ball game brother, not like RB.
v/Orc - Better execution of concepts and consistent.