ok just being honest
this wasnt bad
it just didnt captivate me at all
i almost enjoyed the shorter lines more than the rest
some just seemed to drawn out, or fragmented.
moreoever, rhymes weren't crisp or fluid...like that 'pent' line
it wasnt bad, just not my cup of tea
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Last edited by Rawn MD; 02-12-2014 at 11:32 AM.
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