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Old 02-11-2014, 06:22 AM   #8
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lmao worst attempt at a critique of a verse EVER

do you seriously not see how the couplet rhymes here:

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Officially wack. Walkin breathin shit of a man, that’s always greasin’
I’m Mr. Miyagi crossed between a pistol I’m bangin gongs for weeks
ROFLZzz @ "Banging gongs for weeks" does not in any way
rhyme with "that's always greasin" or any part of that tbh.
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