I thought this was cool. I am not personally big on paragraph form, but I have played with the structure a time or two. It is refreshing in the sense that ya trying something different.
I think it is ALWAYS a good thing to try something different as far as writing is concerned.
As far as the technical aspect to this drop, it had a couple very very minor hiccups...
Nothing real noteworthy. My favorite portion was probably the "I wonder if the real me exists" portion..
It was an entertaining read, and I'll leave you with that.
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