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Originally Posted by H4ZE
I thought this was pretty dope. Dont really have much to say except fix the structure. Here ill give an example of a good structure.
Hi my name is christopher and im six terms from graduating college.
A theatrics major; or surveyor the way ive been obtaining my knowledge,
Ive seen every action flick, but i think horror's my favorite.
I just adore gore, especially if the storyline's a reality basis.
The structure will make it easier for us to read the piece and find the flow.
Other than that, dope shit.
Keep writing and stay blessed. |
You're example of proper structure is ironically poor. You're example lines are uneven, though I am sure he understood what you were trying to tell him. Just Write doesn't need the structure tip, just a fyi. Although I am sure the sentiment is acknowledged.