Hi...
Scrypt didn't have any that was good...
Your lines were too basic and simple...
Read a few battles...
Use some current event lines, name plays, word plays, and personals...
Sharp's verse was cool...
Opener and Sochi line were good...
Vote-Sharp...
Bye...
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