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Old 02-10-2014, 08:19 AM   #6
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First stanza hot, with the German broken English.. as his learning the langauge and developing himself..

the catch up on the second where he meets her again, and gets caught up in demoralizing, flushing, probing and down right abusing her with the turmoil his horded for this lost beauty queen.. was huge - kinda like you can see his German fade out but his been Americanized with the broken streets of (wherever)

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Oh last line flip on the conclusion, as usual awesome..
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