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Old 02-09-2014, 04:38 PM   #4
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Lmao this is true.

I really think the repetition was effective for this verse. An examination into something often overlooked or under discussed like the hereditary smokers fever. Obviously could have done more to give context to the sweater and his grandfather, also why was he banned from the store?

As always, a diamond in the rough of what I really believe is creative genius at a certain strange level.

You're also a douchebag for upping all of these at once.

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