I know the feeling right before they are gone is hard; your stuck between trying to helping them doing all in your power to not give up and just accepting that it's their choice. I have been on the phone doing my best convincing friends to put the gun down, or rather the knife. Thankfully nobody has ever killed themselves on my watch, including myself. But the moment when they hang up, you can only pray. I enjoyed your song for the sole fact that it's 100%, based on a true story. And was said how you meant it. None of that fake metaphor lyrical shit, just a true story. Not sprinkles on the cake.
It takes about 6 months to get over death. I pray you can do it in half that time.
My first track, Alice; I feel can relate to your lyrics. You should check it out, very pleasant to space out too as well.
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