adonis- dope ass flow. enjoyed the whole piece & the beat. really smooth. the rhyme scheme was dope all thru the verse. good shit overall.
It's a beat... and she's mine, fuck a street and in-lines,
On my grind, eating Brie - and sipping fine wine,
You're from Compton? I'm not, never slept in cell blocks,
I don't slang drugs, just vernacular – I'm well off,
Tip your cap to this boss, High-hat snatch – Randy Moss,
I rap - I floss...You rap - I Pods.
I applause...
Your business dropping jaws...The broads...
These vixens - swooning for incision,
the diction is there mission as they lie in that position
No, I might not have a gimmick but I'll paint myself a cynic,
Van Goghing every sentence, making fortunes with out limits.
great flow all over the quoted part of the verse, consistent rhyme scheme.
pryde- this had potential to become something bigger but its too small. some lines are stretched. too large and lacked a better rhyme scheme. lacked some stuff, more creativity. seen before
On the most fire kush found between the flyest coasts and
If you don't know where that's at then you don't get a vote
probably nicest part of the verse, the rest wasnt new. looks rushed overall
v/adonis for a more enjoyable verse. the flow was dope and the imagery. good battle.
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