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Old 02-08-2014, 03:52 PM   #11
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standout lines from each...


karaoke:

If I were you, I'd be more focused on health
Only person wearing Jordan's at Jordan's age should be Jordan himself
--LOTB

Every time u post a pic it looks like the buttons are popping
Hit the track & try getting to a Finishline when a pair Jordan's not dropping

When's the last time you've lost a battle and not cried??
The downslope u've been on could make the ones in Sochi look like a park slide


-vs-


nik:

ur thought process is cheap; ur discussion & current event rhyme poorest
I mean u even flip other people’s tags… so I’m making u pay the price for it

I’ve got ur number… u know how many times I’ve bashed ur plans?!?
I’ve beaten u 7 times & u gonna need the 8th wonder of the world to even have a chance




First off, imo Karaoke has one of the cleanest wording and set-ups in text battling. His verse was solid throughout and keep the momentum i didn't see any slacking. He used 2 good angles (nikkas age/appearance and the jordan ish) and really hammered that. Although the jordan lines would seem too obvious against nikka, he executed them very creative/well. He also had LOTB.

Nikka's wording was not as clean, but had good personals in the beginning and pretty much had the 2nd best line of the battle with that people's tags/pay the price line which i really liked. Some of the personals weren't that effective imo, and overall his punches weren't as effective as Kar's. Still a good verse though.


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