vinzr
dope vocab and flow. actually flowed very nice wit the beat. the descriptions of the scene were smooth and cool. somehow i thought its about cowboys and shit since i've been lately playing that type of games lol. nice verse even though its short, portrayed a cool image.
tyson
here we got a cool concept. scene transitions werent really smooth they were abit dodgy, considering its a small verse i didnt get lost and continued. last lines had a nice poetic touch overall a decent verse.
im giving my vote to vinzr for better vocab, flow and story. this was a short battle but a decent one. nice job fellas
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