ok cool battle.
innovator- you basically flexed. but it wasn't that great of a verse and I think you know that. mechanically it was simplistic. I think you were uninspired. you wrote about nothing at all and if your gonna do that you better wow me with some metaphors and insanely complex structure. that didn't happen. no hate my dude. I just expect more from you.
red glare- started strong. had a poetic feel and cadence. got real off track towards the middle and end. started to feel like ramblings a bit. but it had a theme at least and you stuck to it. I also liked your structure more.
good battle fellas. thanks for the reads.
vote- red glare
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