I may live to regret this but I actually thought this was good lol...shit's relatively simple which I liked, you didn't have this over complexity nonsense that most on rap forums do so that made it refreshin' to me as it was easier to read and you got your point across minus an upped vocabulary.If I'm bein' honest the structure is sorta gay, a few lines could have been made into one instead of a couple...but yeah, not sure if I've read anythin' you've dropped before so it's hard to compare this to previous work of yours...here's what I felt most.
Like you have to fight,
Like drugs is the way to go
Like you shouldn't have a wife,
Like you don't need love you can play the hoes
^^Cool...the like like like like is repetitive as fuck yet what you said after it I dug.
Rap is no longer an artform
Its a way to decieve
And I'm just tryna bring it back
So don't blame it on me
^^Truth.
It may be basic and your flow is really choppy at times yet you have potential,
Stay upwards man.
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