ok I thought this was a really cool concept. something different which is dope. but some parts weren't executed as well as others though and that hurt it a bit
professor x - a really strong verse. the flow was off the charts and it really captured professor x's character to a tee. good work.
hulk- I liked this verse. first half was dope, but it lost something at the end, going a little too deep on the whole mt. Olympus theme and losing the hulk just a tad. I see what you were doing but it might have strayed just a bit there. overall it really worked though.
rogue- this verse didn't work for me at all. I tried reading it as a poem, I tried reading it as someone spitting it but I just couldn't catch the flow. it was waaaay stretched for my liking. I don't like leaving negative feedback in the OM but ill just leave it as saying you had some good ideas that failed to hit the mark for me. I applaud the effort none the less
gambit-this was the style I enjoy the most. but the flow lacked in some parts. I liked your choice of words and what you were saying it just seemed a tad choppy in some spots.
overall I enjoyed this collab. a good read. nice work guys.
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