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Originally Posted by Knucklehead
dude couldnt even make the football team - for that u get hit by the uzi
u'll go from the Drumline, to getting hit w/ a Cannon & losing via a verse worse than that movie
Seen this a couple times, I feel like you tried to make it too detailed.
going against demo Slapshot? u know u'll lose faggot
the way i end PK so quickly... you'd have to imagine i'm playing against the Blue Jackets
you're an obvious queer with the gayest of desires
usually RPKs get filled with bullets.. w/ the loads he takes the thing wouldn't even fire
congrats on beating Dia & Delicousgrl, but when even mediocre comes in ur view
..RPK never get a Title with SiK lines... but HE's in the running after the ones used vs you
eat a dick alias scum
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Originally Posted by RPK
That's homo as fuck,so u should get ready to die fairy
Last time u were under a black businessman...Herman Cain lost the Republican Primary
He doesn't have any skill,so one shot'll be deadin' him
So when I take ur Head off...u'll finally resemble someone I consider a veteran
^^^ not quoted, could have been executed cleaner.
This faggot'll no-show me,he'll hide when he starts eyeing me
Damn bro,I watch the show on A&E...but u give a new meaning to Duck Dyansty
Not a quote either, just wondering what this means... It would make sense if your name was Dynasty.
No one considers u top tier,ur a soft queer busting flows no-show
Ur not in the top brass, knuckle...I'll just knock ur teeth out with one of those
I saw Holly or someone use a concept like this. not a quote
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I got 3-1 in quotes. It's closer than that tho, not a complete romp. RPK had some well thought out concept but didn't employ them to their potential. Work on making your lines concise, get as much across in as little as possible. I know I say this a lot, but it's important.
V/Knuck