deep bro. good honestly. nice reflection. solid rhyming etc to go with it. hard to really give feed on something so personal, can't really say WOW THIS IS AWESOME, or can't really say yo this was wack as fuck.. it is what it is. and i hate that term lol. u did ur thing. good poem steez ahaha. maybe u can show this to ur next chick and she might s ur d for it??
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