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Old 02-05-2014, 05:11 PM   #2
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hey nig, (no racist). this was really good man. as u know im not really on that outerspace shit but this was pretty cool, futuristic cyborg shit, worked pretty well with the pic. told a pretty good little story. really good vocab. really good complexity and scheming. a few parts didn't read 100% smooth as criticism but overall this is a really really solid drop. ur style can be a bit intimidating maybe. i notice u seem to not get a ton of feed usually. it might be the picture thing, ppl see the pic and if they dont like it probly fuck off without even reading. u have sick rhyming ability which i have always enjoyed. i myself find ur topics a little too out there sometimes but i get what ur doing just trying to do something different, so props for even going there a lot of the time.
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