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CopyPat · 02-05-2014, 04:48 PM

i actually read this. so congrats. middle verse was by far the best. first was a good opener. 3rd was a little weak imo and didn't really wrap things up good enough. excellent vocab and imagery. good story telling. pretty relate-able to alot of peeps i would think. just basically showing the mundaneness of life ( i made that word up for u certain), how comfortable we all get, and bored. and how familiar we all get with our neighbors and the community etc. the more i think about it the more i actually like this, it was really well done. its not something i would ever say is like woaaaah crazy dope but it was a good solid collabro and showed some maturity. i liked it

02-05-2014, 04:48 PM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	i actually read this. so congrats. middle verse was by far the best. first was a good opener. 3rd was a little weak imo and didn't really wrap things up good enough. excellent vocab and imagery. good story telling. pretty relate-able to alot of peeps i would think. just basically showing the mundaneness of life ( i made that word up for u certain), how comfortable we all get, and bored. and how familiar we all get with our neighbors and the community etc. the more i think about it the more i actually like this, it was really well done. its not something i would ever say is like woaaaah crazy dope but it was a good solid collabro and showed some maturity. i liked it __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.