you have a really interesting and unique style.. i can't quite put my finger on it. its a bit all over the place, its very aggressive, its in your face. its laid out to read very quickly. i have read alot of ur shit but never really known what to say. alot of it seems a bit random to be honest.
i hate on myself for losers just take it easy buddy dont get me stupid
light grows thin psycho spin make the rhinos wince
just one example but there were lots of lines where i just went huh?? like i have no idea what ur trying to say, or if it even makes sense??
i do enjoy your vocab for the most part, not that its super impressive but its definitely original, i can see why whys likes ur stuff, u two are kindof similar in the feel of ur content for the most part. whys is just way more polished though, your stuff seems really raw. maybe rushed a little. if you do audio i would looooove to hear it though, that would maybe translate all of this a little better and help make it feel a little more finished. text wise like i said it just seems a bit unfocused to me
stay up though, ur style is pretty different man, always cool to see something different
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