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Lars · 02-04-2014, 04:33 PM

There's a LOT said in this, too much if I'm really honest, but without a real 'twist' or anything unexpected it just becomes a tale you've regurgitated that I'm already familiar with. You get me? It needs a new take, something original and creative to make it stand out, this just told me a story I already knew.

02-04-2014, 04:33 PM	#4
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809298	There's a LOT said in this, too much if I'm really honest, but without a real 'twist' or anything unexpected it just becomes a tale you've regurgitated that I'm already familiar with. You get me? It needs a new take, something original and creative to make it stand out, this just told me a story I already knew. __________________ PROVEN BITER Last edited by Lars; 02-05-2014 at 02:45 AM.