V/ deadman
Was a dope piece for sure, was expecting a story but you used it as allegory for the human condition. Flow and wording was nasty, couldn't really find any parts I didn't like but that's pretty typical with you. Your imagery is standout because not only is it worded crispy but you bring lots of interesting visuals / metas I was never expecting every single time I read your shit. On a deadman scale, I would like this more than 7 or 8 out of every 10 verses you write. Dope man.
Cristian I preferred your style in the first two battles. It was pretty good I just really thought bringing NCGs to the forefront was kind of blah. Expected a lil more creativity from you to be honest but the first stanza was pretty dope. Just wasn't really feeling the rest to be honest man. Maybe other voters will feel different, don't know. I got dead taking this, good battle bros...
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