zygote- although i agree with damn near everything you asserted, there were too many "I's"
it's very hard for me to vote against your piece for the very point you were making.
thing is, you just.. well, your piece was statements i think we can ALL agree on.
soOo. . rather than making a point and really going with it.. i think you were stating the obvious.
rather than drawing on the obvious and being creative with those observations.
however - i really did enjoy your piece, and am only being a negative fuck because that's how i roll.
too many "i-'s" for me to vote your way. for the record i feel bad about it because that's what your verse was about.. i think i'd have voted for you without so many "i's"
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Originally Posted by IamBenT
help me to see that, rather than philosophize on it, so we can really see your art. cuz you have all the tools.
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^what he said. (in a diff match this week.)
gen- although i almost want to vote against you for an obvious response verse-
i can't do that .even mentioned triplets in the last bars.. it was a good response.
you made some good observations and worded them well. even more importantly - you developed your piece based on general statements we can all agree with (^) but worded them eloquently.
/v gen - what really got me was how you broke up the patterns of sounds to the beginning and end of following bars. sometimes dropping second is an obvious advantage.. this is the case here, in my opinion.