adonis - felt the layout more overall. can't say much else cuz i'm low on time but i felt how you came it it more.
It's a beat... and she's mine, fuck a street and in-lines,
On my grind, eating Brie - and sipping fine wine,
You're from Compton? I'm not, never slept in cell blocks,
I don't slang drugs, just vernacular – I'm well off,
too honest.. and still fit the feel of the beat well.
pryde- although you did come with some real statements.. the repetitive words/phrases killed it for me.
All women is beautiful, and all you niggas lame
And against pryde in the studio all you niggas is tame
all women is beautiful .. against (me/pride).. just a bit generic for my taste. still enjoyed the verse but lost me at parts.
/v to adonis for the flow really. jumping between syllable counts was a major + with the beat.
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