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Old 02-02-2014, 08:21 PM   #9
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GOW gets this... blowjob line was LOTB . I have seen GOW go harder than this.before but.his verse decent. Jon I feel like your verse was worded pretty badly and it made it difficult for me too read it and that makes it less effective. I see that you have some decent concepts but they were not constructed in a way that made them hit..decent battle I guess but it was one sided.

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