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Old 02-02-2014, 04:42 PM   #8
DjFlame
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GOW- Opener was alright, but it may or may not be true, deffo taking away from the punch. Nice punchline though, 2and2 was alright. Smooth ass transition on the next bar, using the internals, but you didn't really hit him with a personal. A nice punch. The next bar had some average multi's but the set-up was stronger than the punch! Next bar had some dope ass multi's but not a true/good personal to be found! Next bar's setup was complete selfhype filler bullshit, but you know, the personal was OK. Deffo too average/ plain, I want to be excited. 7/10

Tha Don- First bar was alright, didn't get the reference though. You need to try to find a personal or something on your opponent. The next bars multi's weren't that good, because the the first syllables didnt rhyme like they should have. Pill and Life does not rhyme. The next bar didnt have a multi in it either, it was an OK punch. Next bar had an attempted punch, deffo not any good though. Closer was OK, prolly your best bar, and it wasn't even that good. 3/10

My Vote Goes To: GOW for having some better punches
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