Damn
Okay *turns off beat*
Crazy.
Zenland, for somebody with dial up connection you still got optimum flow. You said you didn't have access to the instrumental and wrote it on the wing, and you still managed to express pain the beat exemplified. I thought what you wrote was inspired and usually when someone says "I got inspired from such and such" I get uninspired. But I could tell you were driven and the flow came out like a breathe of fresh stale air.
Bleak, verse came off to that beat. Felt your grief in a few of those lines. 'street lights to guide the path/ 5-0 creepin, hold my breath when they ridin past' hood shit. shooting sunshine, shit got crazy visual in the chorus
overall
this is tough man. but ima roll with zenland because I saw the exchanges he had with split in the thread talking about the school system and such and I respect that he put those thoughts into rhymes like that
so vote - zenland
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