I expected this to be short so Ima come back thru shortly and edit this with a few quotables...I read it tho, and yeah shits nice with it.Your flow/multies are seriously sick...content be tight man, I'll break things south better when I return.
Aight so as I was sayin'...before alcohol took me out of reality and threw me into a vomitin' fit.
"Origin of Language"
Food is a must, so in tandem they work
with a mutual trust in an absence of words.
Hands are their first tool, signals made with the fingers,
so an understanding’s asserted to be relayed at a distance.
With a waving of digits and signed interaction
a basic depiction of what’s required is established.
^^That's fuckin' dope.
Their calls and behaviour grow ever-expressive
and forge their relationships strength in dependence.
It lends to expression, though their conveyance is blunt,
a succession of gestured sounds made with their tongues.
^^Chea.
The pair of them use this form for announcing
the areas new food sources are found in.
As more is recounted and usage increases
it also has grounding in grooming and teaching.
Due to this reason adaptation excels
in the communicative region they’re creating themselves.
These basic, but central, components combining
as each stage is essential for homogenising.
The protocol rises, trust’s further cemented
in a social environment through the emergence of friendship.
Working together authenticated the bond
as they learn from endeavours, which makes it so strong.
^^Great section.
He swept at the vines that appeared in his path
expecting to find a clearing at last.
When the searing impact of a blade struck in his chest
hand-engineered from a flat stone, just like the hunter possessed.
The blood unrelenting, a sign of abatement,
he looked up to question and eye his assailant.
^^Nice bro.
Closer was solid also...just a really good read Lars, loved the imagery you laced this with, liked how you didn't drift at all and kept shit so fluent in doin' so...great piece.
Stay upright.
Last edited by Exis; 02-01-2014 at 08:57 AM.
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