nik-A took this comfortably, the back giving out shit has been done to death, the hair thing could be seen coming from a mile away, coke line was worded badly but could have been a decent idea, the Molly thing again I could read where it was going before the punch hit, you need some misdirection if you're going to use those. I had the same problem with Beyond's style tbh. Closer was wack.
Nik took it. Ryan12 is an idiot.
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