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Old 01-29-2014, 11:45 AM   #9
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I bet he'll joke how I ain't fight aero at the Hilton the faggot fuck
Diff is When Allen meet strangers in a hotel lobby it's to carry the baggage up

Ok'ish. Jab at most, IMO.

Ur reps never made noise. The vets lied to u cuz ull never hack it
U get strung along in this circle, ur txt career made a tennis racket

Like the concept and your execution of it, but don't really think this had any major impact as well.

When I entered nc in my browser and saw u was still mid tier was quite sad
Shit was a bigger tab let down than slipping off a roof and dropping an iPad

Nah.

How many decades of wack bars does this lame got????
ppl go threw growing pains but for u it must be agonizing stuck in the same spot

This was alright.

I doubt it bothers Allen tho. To me that's not a shock
U must be secure in urself cuz when it comes to being a faggot u got it locked

Eh, pretty cool.

I mean Allen's a weak clone. He could never touch the throne I keep owned
U couldn't be the face of the nbl if u tatted all 3 letters on ya cheek bones

Nah.

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Got the machette sharpened, ready to chop & bruise shit
Stab ur chest till there's a open space cowboy big enough to fit a astronaut thru it

Cool concept, your delivery of it kind of took away the impact tho. Wording/execution was weird.

I be fuckin bitches on planes, ur a pussy that lies n scare hoes
Ur idea of the mile high club's running that far stoned when u locked eyes w/ aero

Dope.

Lmfao at ur fat ass avy pic, chubby ur not winning this jerk
This nigga V-neck stretched so wide a whole ny borough can swim in his shirt

Eh, concept their, executed poorly tho.

Wat u ate ur self into depression?, went Mia in ur town dude
Shit idk where Turban but I can gueranntee his mouth was wrapped around food

Nah.

U have imposters now? LOL, but I didn't believe wat came out that rookies mouth
Cuz I knew that wasn't the real hush...he didn't call out aero to fight then pussy out

I think you could have expanded on this. Weak execution.

Aeros goons had u petrified to walk the streets, this fuck is a puss
Every time u go by a hotel u think of A-team & if u see a black van u duck in a bush

Nah.

Pretty close battle. Nothing really stood out other then that Mile High from AK. Hush had some ok'ish concepts that he executed pretty smoothly but had no real impact, IMO. The Tennis Racket was ok'ish. The Tab Let was corny, IMO. Growing pains was ok, Secure in yourself could have been executed or taking in a different direction, had potential. AK's space cowboy had potential, but executed poorly. Mile High was nice direct shot, V-neck had potential, executed poorly tho. Turban was meh! Could have been taking in another direction, had mad potential to be dope. HIs imposter bar was weak, IMO. I think you could have worked on that, definitely had potential. A-Team was a miss, IMO. Overall, Bar for Bar. I got HUSH taking this barely. Just an overall consistent shot with less misses. AK definitely had the line of the battle with the mile high, but struggled to execute the rest of his concepts. I would say if he executed his personals a lot better he could have easily taken this.

MVGT: Hush, with a more consistent verse - punches/disses.

Alright battle, keep writing fellas.