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Old 03-10-2013, 12:58 PM   #9
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Holy shit mad props to both guys. Read this when both guys first dropped and reread them now for a better vote so let's get to it.
Frank: Kind of crazy concept here like you do everyweek but god damn did it work. Bringing math into the streets haha. Dope. The rhyme scheming was ill as well with multis dispersed throughout the piece which only helped to better get this concept across to the reader. Props Frank.
pohfig: Great verse. This piece gave off some intense imagery of the struggling life on the street. Dope content. The scheming of this piece was dope as well. It flowed perfectly and gave the message you were trying to portray perfectly. Another good piece from you.

Overall I gotta say that both guys came even this week forreal. Both deserve to be here so props to both. So after saying that I gotta vote on who I enjoyed the most, and that's gotta be Frank
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