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Old 03-10-2013, 11:02 AM   #10
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sick battle as expected.

zygote- another complaining about voters verse. ummm its getting a little stale but it was once again very well done. I enjoyed it. the flow was sick, and it just worked on so many different levels.

genocide- your verse had a good flow, it had a direction , sort of. I wish you would have maybe picked a more definitive topic cause it seemed a little free flowing in some spots. the structure was dope. but it wasn't your best work by a mile.

overall- I think both displayed the immaculate flow and structure I expected. just in the end zygote had a better message.

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