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Old 01-28-2014, 08:06 AM   #8
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copy paste cloud and tequila worm paddle free were the stand-out lines for me.

mouth puddle's drippin - fresh case, only a couple missin'
slept filthy, pled guilty to a life sentence of double fistin'
light relationships & stiff sadness, bliss comes with baggage
'you gonna take that last swig?' addicts, FORGET MATTRESS

dope staccato rhythm (at least how i read it. like choppy but in a good melodic way)

as always, crisp wording.

Enjoyed the verse overall a lot, can't tell how old it is if it is a repost. I think your tourney drop spoiled me, cause in the introspective/ freewrite/ vent category almost everything *works* together by nature... unless you got some seriously bizarre wording/ tone issues. In directed topical competition, it suddenly becomes mad important how your stuff works together and what kind of picture you paint. And you made a seamless transition like it was nothing lol.

Anyways, js that your style definitely appeals to character sketches and other topicals in a way that almost isnt fair to the competition.. and its evident here (enjoyably). fuck, im rambling. i feel like im thinking to myself in animorph speech from the otherside of a k-hole. Keep an eye out for that collab. Keep keyin.
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