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Originally Posted by Wise Ass
this is for you lone rangers, that hate allegiance
every django has his day- damn near taste the freedom
seen it all before, just couldn't frame the sequence
seen the sun set, just couldn't chase the pheonix
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that was a tight intro. I liked the piece alot, sometimes the scheme threw me off guard though, like here:
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Originally Posted by Wise Ass
walk in the clouds, a grape for squeezing
it's cancer cartons, kush & beer
rafter carvings- brooks was here
fresh scars be scaring the women
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made it a bit awkward to read, but other than this bit, it read perfectly fine. good post.