[Adonis]

Aopogize boys, on my broke phone but since I've read ill vvote, but due to broken from grammar and puncuation will be sad.

Ziggie I liked the route. You took, the story it self was quit captivating. The images deep, the emotion strong. I enjoyed the ending and what I took as the overall theme.... we fight and dissagree, might even hate each other and go to war, but in thhe ennd, if us is all we have when we both struggle to overwhemling pain, then the hate evaporates". True for eveery walk of human life I must say, at least mostly.. baby had some great emotion in the begining, but as you went on the seasons shortened in paragrraph length and became more straight forward. I did enjoy the begining muuch more beccause it read like a verse where I there were underrlying meanings and hidden messages', then the end or bottom half seemed more just throwin together. You did bring the feeling of highschool summer strong to the surface. Both had deccent flow, I edged zyg slightly howevverr. The storys equally witty considering topic. Touggh vote in all honesty, but in the end all I can ever do is vote for the one I most enjoyed

Vote zygote in a very close match