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Originally Posted by Objective

In that case your general statements were mostly wack tho'. No hate, just saying a lot of those lines were corny. I can enjoy flex pieces quite a bit, not this one tho'. If you have another piece you're more satisfied with or honestly think it's a lot better than this, feel free to post a link to it and I'll give you another chance to show off something that isn't horrible.
This ish had a basic flow that was easy to follow but it was wack as fuck cuz some of the lines didn't make sense, or I thought the concepts was either executed bad or reeked of filler. I liked the start tho', just not how you followed through with it because it didn't really lead to anything worth reading.

I feel ya

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