Seems like rhyme-practice to me...
''drop a deuce on a priest (peace)
Maul a dude with a piece of golfing shoe from my feet''
^ You serious? That was wack as fuck and made close to no sense at all. In fact, a lot of the verse makes no sense at all and you rhyme for the sake of rhyming/flow. You need some content to go with that.
It started off as an idea that could be cool but got progressively wacker as the verse went on.
''Fiji tiger in a cipher with a mule and a steed.''
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