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Old 01-25-2014, 10:43 PM   #5
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Holy shit this is epic man..

Coming up from the hypogeum,
Drumming thumps in the coliseum
from stamping feet; the fans this week
seek to see a sanguine feast
between Man and beast
that refuse to stand at ease.
It’s here I stand, with these,
Except my stance is peace: hand on sheathe

^ straight stylin on em


He doesn’t know I’m lion-hearted,
Aquiline eyes won’t fail to find a target
as iron charts a line across his
skull until the eyes are pried apart, it’s
no time to be proud, for
the clash of steel’s swallowed by the crowd’s roar:

Overall this was a very solid piece man.. love the theme, and you stuck to it like glue throughout the entire thing. Much props man
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