Holly:
Flow/rhythym/multies and wording was on point as usual, I have to say this wasn't your best showing concept wise though... in a 16 line verse I wanna see more personals than what you had... Elder scrolls was kind of a personal I suppose, but could have been set up better for that aspect of it... you didn't really have misses but for the most part they were just OK/cool... window line was the only one that really stood out to me.... I mean 16 lines of OK/cool with no misses is a pretty solid showing, but from YOU I had expected a couple more standouts
Muff:
Flow and swag were very good and your wording/flips for the most part made for harsh punchlines. Flips were creative as well. The level of your concepts was much more varied. You had the closer which was clever and the muff caught an L which although not 100% technically sound was close enough and the punch was funny and harsh... those 2 were standouts.... buuut, then you had Euthenasia (played) and Phallus-see (played and corny). The rest was cool/decent.
Kind of close but Holly had the LOTB and no real misses, Muff had 2 I thought missed and his 2 standouts weren't quite as good... although generally speaking I think his wording for punches (harshness) and creativity of the flips was better than Holly's, he just didn't have as good concepts to word/flip overall on this occassion.
Close, but
V/ Hollywod
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