zygote - Going through these votes quick. I assume..."sceptical " is skeptical? Couldn't find what you wrote in dictionary. I couldn't catch the flow with the beat listed, maybe you rap much faster then I, but with beat off the flow in your verse was 55 times better...however I would take the word...Benzene...out for flows sake and it wouldn't hurt line concept. As a whole, I loved the back and forth from past losses to criticizing voters and competitors. It made me smirk, and yet you kept up with the flow...I also appreciated the inners, I've read like 10 verses from this site ever, and I think this might be the first verse I read ever with inners here @ AOB. All in all I enjoyed the verse and can't complain one bit. Except the excerpt...That piece I might have liked, I don't mind being enlightened or having to think to get a concept, but that bar was nothing to write home about.
Genocide - First, love the Av...completely off topic but it must be said. your verse paired well with the beat, so kudos on writing a verse with a flow to match a beat. Not many people can pull that off. LMFAO @ you both misspelling or using wrong tense on the same word...skeptics, skeptical, sceptics...FYI you both. "Everybody"...So you seemed to take the same route as your counterpart as far as concept go...And while I liked you flow better, it seemed like at points you rhymed for flow alone, it always made sense but it just felt added...maybe the fact that this was Key'd??
Vote - so this is close, both short and to the point, it seemed like neither edited or entered in a spell check, both used the same concept it seemed...Gen had a better flow for the beat, while I liked Zygote's flow more because it felt like his verse was just "meatier" to me, yet still had a decent flow...All in all, extremely close vote, you both stylistically mesh well, but I will say I enjoyed Zygote's verse more, however, slightly.
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