Zygote, this is one of the best verses I've read this week and the fact that its about the writing process and what it means to you personally gives the content more voice, plus you made itkep apply to the construct of this league which even as a new person within this league, I understand and relate to. Your content, narration an direction all kept me interested from start to finish and I was actually hoping for more by the end which is something you will rarely read from me for anyone. Then the flow.. all that and I'm just now getting to the flow which was smooth and brough out the skill level of the narration and content. Inspired by frustration in the way writing has developed I guess, but very nicely said and put together.
Genocide, this was nicely written and easy to follow with a fuck y'all if u think this type of narration.. the flow was cool and kept it moving... basically the content spoke to me and said that within its narration... you know ur dope even though you don't always know how to show it in various examples like punch use and shit which is very understandable and an honest and humbling view that a lot of real rappers would wanna learn from and set those standard... some clever lines too and a good display of overall skills.
Vote Zygote because his content had more direction and the narration was more detailed to make his point.
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