[Adonis]

OK...First let me start with....It's a damn shame the First Title Match has zero votes while every other thread has a steady flow of votes. Moving on...

Frank - I like the surrounding theme of mathematics. I was a bit lost initially about there being two beats, but my slow mind caught on soon enough...It flowed with the beat for the most part, but you slipped a few times in 2nd and third verses.

Calculate my dough Line could have been re worded some how to make it more fluid.

Also at a few points it seemed like the rhyme/math concept over powered the actual meaning of bars...

That's the difference in addition to divisions just begun.///Now I'm trine park my bentley, in a parallel line

neither of these truly make sense to me, the wording in the first is wrong or something, not a proper sentence. The 2nd is just blah....seemed like a throw in to for math concept sake. You also had some intelegent bars...

Getting Pi - I'm in my prime, interior angle, acute triangles dangle when I bang you at the right angle - 90's degrees

Flow was a bit off IMO, but the concept behind this line I like. I took it as you saying your style is from the 90's when hip-hop existed instead of what is now.

All in all, ok verse. Seems like a lot of flexing going around this week which I usually hate, but even I did so to an extent. I think some polishing up on each line could have up graded this entire piece from, decent to good.


Pohfig - A verse about people in general and how the world spins pretty much. Not sure if this was set in a concert but I doubt it. First read I looked at the word, "Crumple" and thought typo. Was going to say something, then looked it up..+2 for teaching me something....

There's mean hoes wincing like they aint seen the light of day yet -
in some club wear - up there acting too fly
and stay jet

Something isn't clicking with me here, maybe the "up" or "wear" is supposed to be "where"? IDK but I don't get this at all. Like it aint even english and shit...Props for word usuage again "tach" :thumbsup: Upon second read I get the bolded bar, just think the word "up" is out of place. it's meant to break the sentences, yet up should be another word but it's there to connect jet/fly...not a fan but its makes sense.

they want that paper concealed from birth like black presidents.

Line of the match easy...had me audible LOL...

vote-Poh His verse was more down my alley, to me his was deeper, flowed better and had superior imagery and word usuage. Good battle.